Pitch #6, written by Jayne!
Pitch #3, by Kirsty, came in as a close second.
Jayne will have her choice of an Amazon or Barnes and Noble $25 gift card.
I'd like to thank everyone who sent their pitch in to be critiqued. I loved getting to know you better as we got the contest rolling. And many thanks to those who commented as well. Your insights and advice were invaluable. I've had a great time with this contest, and I'm already considering ideas for another one. (If you have any suggestions, please let me know!)
Something tells me this should be a longer post, but I've been shoveling snow, and I'm a bit tired. I'm trying not to think about the chapter I was supposed to turn into the Slushies by Thursday...
But I digress.
Thanks again for making the first Slushbuster contest such a great experience. I've said it before, but it bears repeating:
We've met amazing folks through this blog. We are so fortunate to know you!